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	<description>An anthology of optimistic, near future SF</description>
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		<title>By: Tony Schaab</title>
		<link>http://shineanthology.wordpress.com/2008/10/28/shine-anthology-guidelines/#comment-468</link>
		<dc:creator>Tony Schaab</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 23 Jun 2009 01:08:47 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Jetse,

GREAT website you have here!  I discovered it only last week, and quite by accident at that, but I love what you have done and what I have seen so far.

I am amazingly glad that you have extended the deadline for anthology submissions.  I have immediately started working on a new story, and hope to have it submitted to you in the next few weeks.

Cheers!

--Tony</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Jetse,</p>
<p>GREAT website you have here!  I discovered it only last week, and quite by accident at that, but I love what you have done and what I have seen so far.</p>
<p>I am amazingly glad that you have extended the deadline for anthology submissions.  I have immediately started working on a new story, and hope to have it submitted to you in the next few weeks.</p>
<p>Cheers!</p>
<p>&#8211;Tony</p>
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		<title>By: Things to keep in mind when writing a story for Shine. &#171; Shineanthology&#8217;s Weblog</title>
		<link>http://shineanthology.wordpress.com/2008/10/28/shine-anthology-guidelines/#comment-340</link>
		<dc:creator>Things to keep in mind when writing a story for Shine. &#171; Shineanthology&#8217;s Weblog</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 17 Apr 2009 17:01:41 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] Do refresh your mind with the guidelines here. [...]</description>
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		<title>By: shineanthology</title>
		<link>http://shineanthology.wordpress.com/2008/10/28/shine-anthology-guidelines/#comment-313</link>
		<dc:creator>shineanthology</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 07 Mar 2009 22:27:04 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Bill,

A benign energy company? Interesting.

It surely sounds interesting, and I&#039;ll gladly look at it, with the caveat -- obviously -- that it should have an upbeat tone or ending.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Bill,</p>
<p>A benign energy company? Interesting.</p>
<p>It surely sounds interesting, and I&#8217;ll gladly look at it, with the caveat &#8212; obviously &#8212; that it should have an upbeat tone or ending.</p>
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		<title>By: Bill Starr</title>
		<link>http://shineanthology.wordpress.com/2008/10/28/shine-anthology-guidelines/#comment-312</link>
		<dc:creator>Bill Starr</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 07 Mar 2009 07:07:03 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>How about an ecological disaster story told from the other side?
A green advocacy group trying to help nature with a new formula releases forces that could destroy civilization.  An agent of a large energy company infiltrates the group in a desperate effort to avert catastrophe.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>How about an ecological disaster story told from the other side?<br />
A green advocacy group trying to help nature with a new formula releases forces that could destroy civilization.  An agent of a large energy company infiltrates the group in a desperate effort to avert catastrophe.</p>
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		<title>By: Taqwacores: what fiction can do &#171; Yukon Science Fiction/Fantasy Writer</title>
		<link>http://shineanthology.wordpress.com/2008/10/28/shine-anthology-guidelines/#comment-244</link>
		<dc:creator>Taqwacores: what fiction can do &#171; Yukon Science Fiction/Fantasy Writer</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 23 Dec 2008 19:57:07 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] want around and then destroy it. And thank God we got rid of &#8220;it.&#8221; I think the Shine Anthology is seeking to help us imagine some creative solutions&#8211;and I still encourage you to submit. [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] want around and then destroy it. And thank God we got rid of &#8220;it.&#8221; I think the Shine Anthology is seeking to help us imagine some creative solutions&#8211;and I still encourage you to submit. [...]</p>
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		<title>By: shineanthology</title>
		<link>http://shineanthology.wordpress.com/2008/10/28/shine-anthology-guidelines/#comment-194</link>
		<dc:creator>shineanthology</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 04 Dec 2008 09:41:02 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Sergey,

1) Both.

I like the scientific concepts or technological ideas to be well-worked out, but I also like great characters striving for the near-impossible. Ideally, both technological progress and strong personalities interact fervently with each other: for example a lot of technological innovation can be driven by political choices (Germany&#039;s energy policies driving a wave of green technologies, for example), or innovative entrepreneurs can drive technological change (Silicon Valley, for example).

Thus, a combination of the two would be ideal. Top it off with superb prose and a highly compelling narrative and you&#039;ve got a winner. Obviously, if either hard SF or charater-driven SF is not your forte then try to emphasize your strong point without neglecting the other.

2) No preference: I both like an exciting adventure and post-modern, slipstreamish musings of relationships in the near future. I believe that style follows content, that is: know what the story really is about, and then try to find the best form to present the substance.

For example, I can imagine an action/adventure story where the (anti-)heroine/hero does research into the last remaining Arctic ice shelfs and is almost killed by a starving polar bear, runs into ice-breaking tankers searching for the last oil reserves, winds up in a demonstration battle between Greenpeace activists trying to keep cruise liners full of tourists from visiting the last pristine remains of the melting ice caps, concluded with a Canadian coast guard vessel chasing away trespassing Japanese or Norwegean whalers.

Similarly, I can imagine a slightly offbeat, slippery piece about a future internet investigator who tries to juggle a research into overpopulation and economic wellbeing -- which old-style corporations try to suppress -- with raising adopted kids in a single sex relationship, where her/his partner complains about being neglected and the incessant need to do volunteer work in the local charity shop.

What works, works: some stories are better told in a direct, thrilling way while other stories work best with sly, post-modern smile. A story&#039;s content, theme and message determine style, and good storytelling tops almost everything.

Also, I&#039;m looking for variety in this anthology: while I do want stories that are optimistic and near future SF, I do really want great diversity within that remit. I&#039;ll gladly pulish and action adventure piece where the hero takes on Global Warming next to a thoughtful depiction of gender equality under technological change, as long as (I think) they both *work*.

2) Do I hate twists? I hate twists when the come out of the blue, or are &lt;i&gt;deus ex machinae&lt;/i&gt;. A twist can work well if it is both subtly and carefully foreshadowed, making it both inevitable and a surprise. As in the reader didn&#039;t quite see it coming on the surface, but in the end -- and in retrospect -- the twist was both foreseeable and inevitable. It is very hard to do this right, but the rewards are similarly great.

Humour: I love humour. Keep in mind that humour is greatly dependent on taste, and extremely hard to do well (the old adage &#039;Dying is easy, comedy is hard&#039; is not far from the truth).

As mentioned, I do want variety in this antho, so would certainly welcome a humourous story that fits within the guidelines. I&#039;m certainly not looking for relentless Polyannas with no sense of humour. Let your characters fight for a better tomorrow, but also let them be aware of the often ironic and self-contradictory nature of their goals and actions. If humour is not your strong point, then often it works better in small and subtle doses. Having said that, an all-out devastating satire of people trying to do their worst (or best) with very counterproductive and/or funny side effects (think &lt;i&gt;This Is Spinal Tap&lt;/i&gt;) would be welcome, too.

Apart from the anthology&#039;s theme of optimistic, near future SF I don&#039;t want to limit an author&#039;s creativity and imagination. If the theme inspires you, write what you think works best with passion and precision.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Sergey,</p>
<p>1) Both.</p>
<p>I like the scientific concepts or technological ideas to be well-worked out, but I also like great characters striving for the near-impossible. Ideally, both technological progress and strong personalities interact fervently with each other: for example a lot of technological innovation can be driven by political choices (Germany&#8217;s energy policies driving a wave of green technologies, for example), or innovative entrepreneurs can drive technological change (Silicon Valley, for example).</p>
<p>Thus, a combination of the two would be ideal. Top it off with superb prose and a highly compelling narrative and you&#8217;ve got a winner. Obviously, if either hard SF or charater-driven SF is not your forte then try to emphasize your strong point without neglecting the other.</p>
<p>2) No preference: I both like an exciting adventure and post-modern, slipstreamish musings of relationships in the near future. I believe that style follows content, that is: know what the story really is about, and then try to find the best form to present the substance.</p>
<p>For example, I can imagine an action/adventure story where the (anti-)heroine/hero does research into the last remaining Arctic ice shelfs and is almost killed by a starving polar bear, runs into ice-breaking tankers searching for the last oil reserves, winds up in a demonstration battle between Greenpeace activists trying to keep cruise liners full of tourists from visiting the last pristine remains of the melting ice caps, concluded with a Canadian coast guard vessel chasing away trespassing Japanese or Norwegean whalers.</p>
<p>Similarly, I can imagine a slightly offbeat, slippery piece about a future internet investigator who tries to juggle a research into overpopulation and economic wellbeing &#8212; which old-style corporations try to suppress &#8212; with raising adopted kids in a single sex relationship, where her/his partner complains about being neglected and the incessant need to do volunteer work in the local charity shop.</p>
<p>What works, works: some stories are better told in a direct, thrilling way while other stories work best with sly, post-modern smile. A story&#8217;s content, theme and message determine style, and good storytelling tops almost everything.</p>
<p>Also, I&#8217;m looking for variety in this anthology: while I do want stories that are optimistic and near future SF, I do really want great diversity within that remit. I&#8217;ll gladly pulish and action adventure piece where the hero takes on Global Warming next to a thoughtful depiction of gender equality under technological change, as long as (I think) they both *work*.</p>
<p>2) Do I hate twists? I hate twists when the come out of the blue, or are <i>deus ex machinae</i>. A twist can work well if it is both subtly and carefully foreshadowed, making it both inevitable and a surprise. As in the reader didn&#8217;t quite see it coming on the surface, but in the end &#8212; and in retrospect &#8212; the twist was both foreseeable and inevitable. It is very hard to do this right, but the rewards are similarly great.</p>
<p>Humour: I love humour. Keep in mind that humour is greatly dependent on taste, and extremely hard to do well (the old adage &#8216;Dying is easy, comedy is hard&#8217; is not far from the truth).</p>
<p>As mentioned, I do want variety in this antho, so would certainly welcome a humourous story that fits within the guidelines. I&#8217;m certainly not looking for relentless Polyannas with no sense of humour. Let your characters fight for a better tomorrow, but also let them be aware of the often ironic and self-contradictory nature of their goals and actions. If humour is not your strong point, then often it works better in small and subtle doses. Having said that, an all-out devastating satire of people trying to do their worst (or best) with very counterproductive and/or funny side effects (think <i>This Is Spinal Tap</i>) would be welcome, too.</p>
<p>Apart from the anthology&#8217;s theme of optimistic, near future SF I don&#8217;t want to limit an author&#8217;s creativity and imagination. If the theme inspires you, write what you think works best with passion and precision.</p>
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		<title>By: Sergey Gerasimov</title>
		<link>http://shineanthology.wordpress.com/2008/10/28/shine-anthology-guidelines/#comment-193</link>
		<dc:creator>Sergey Gerasimov</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 04 Dec 2008 05:16:33 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>What do you prefer:
1)	hard science fiction or character-driven science fiction?
2)	action-adventure SF or something like Strange Horizons publishes? Do you hate twists?

And what do you think about humour?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>What do you prefer:<br />
1)	hard science fiction or character-driven science fiction?<br />
2)	action-adventure SF or something like Strange Horizons publishes? Do you hate twists?</p>
<p>And what do you think about humour?</p>
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		<title>By: shineanthology</title>
		<link>http://shineanthology.wordpress.com/2008/10/28/shine-anthology-guidelines/#comment-179</link>
		<dc:creator>shineanthology</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 26 Nov 2008 22:21:09 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Ken,

We&#039;re indeed talking at cross-purposes a bit here, so it&#039;s good to get a clearer idea of what you&#039;re thinking of.

No need to write about the (preferably) hardfought progress itself: that can linger in the background, be a part of the (new) scenery.

Also, it&#039;s definitely true that any form of progress has its (partial) winners or (partial) losers: each improvement comes with a price tag, and one hopes (and tries to assure) that the benefits outweigh the costs.

What you have in mind could certainly work: so do feel free to try me with it. I certainly need different approaches to give the anthology a certain variety and diversity. 

Finally, on the one hand I try to limit a writer&#039;s artistic freedom as little as possible; while on the other hand I need stories that work within the remit of the anthology. It&#039;s a balancing act, and I&#039;m quite happy both getting and answering queries like yours.

Success with your writing!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Ken,</p>
<p>We&#8217;re indeed talking at cross-purposes a bit here, so it&#8217;s good to get a clearer idea of what you&#8217;re thinking of.</p>
<p>No need to write about the (preferably) hardfought progress itself: that can linger in the background, be a part of the (new) scenery.</p>
<p>Also, it&#8217;s definitely true that any form of progress has its (partial) winners or (partial) losers: each improvement comes with a price tag, and one hopes (and tries to assure) that the benefits outweigh the costs.</p>
<p>What you have in mind could certainly work: so do feel free to try me with it. I certainly need different approaches to give the anthology a certain variety and diversity. </p>
<p>Finally, on the one hand I try to limit a writer&#8217;s artistic freedom as little as possible; while on the other hand I need stories that work within the remit of the anthology. It&#8217;s a balancing act, and I&#8217;m quite happy both getting and answering queries like yours.</p>
<p>Success with your writing!</p>
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		<title>By: Ken Schneyer</title>
		<link>http://shineanthology.wordpress.com/2008/10/28/shine-anthology-guidelines/#comment-177</link>
		<dc:creator>Ken Schneyer</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 26 Nov 2008 02:11:40 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks for the response.  We were speaking to cross-purposes.  I meant sad for the &lt;i&gt;characters&lt;/i&gt; in the story, not necessarilly for the &quot;world&quot; or &quot;future&quot; in which the story takes place.   I don&#039;t have a story written for this anthology yet, but most of my stories involve dramatic difficulties for the characters themselves, and whether they end &quot;well&quot; (for the characters) is sometimes a matter of opinion.

If you&#039;re looking for stories &lt;i&gt;about&lt;/i&gt; the &quot;hard-fought&quot; progress itself, then I&#039;m probably not your guy.  I&#039;d be much more interested in the individual people, and if the progress was &quot;good,&quot; then my instinct would be to make the outcome of the plot &quot;tragic&quot; in some way for the individuals involved, even (especially!) in light of a &quot;good&quot; outcome for society as a whole.

See, most definitions of &quot;progress&quot; are societal in scope:  productivity increases, or pollution decreases, or the standard of living improves, or world hunger is reduced, or overpopulation ceases to be a problem, or statistical measures of social utility increase, etc., etc.  It never (it can&#039;t really) mean individual improvement for each and every person in the society.

So if we had a society that was really &quot;better&quot; by any one of those measures, my instinct, as an artist, would be to find the individual for whom it didn&#039;t work. S/he&#039;d be an exception, necessarily -- that that&#039;s what would make him/her (and the story) interesting.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for the response.  We were speaking to cross-purposes.  I meant sad for the <i>characters</i> in the story, not necessarilly for the &#8220;world&#8221; or &#8220;future&#8221; in which the story takes place.   I don&#8217;t have a story written for this anthology yet, but most of my stories involve dramatic difficulties for the characters themselves, and whether they end &#8220;well&#8221; (for the characters) is sometimes a matter of opinion.</p>
<p>If you&#8217;re looking for stories <i>about</i> the &#8220;hard-fought&#8221; progress itself, then I&#8217;m probably not your guy.  I&#8217;d be much more interested in the individual people, and if the progress was &#8220;good,&#8221; then my instinct would be to make the outcome of the plot &#8220;tragic&#8221; in some way for the individuals involved, even (especially!) in light of a &#8220;good&#8221; outcome for society as a whole.</p>
<p>See, most definitions of &#8220;progress&#8221; are societal in scope:  productivity increases, or pollution decreases, or the standard of living improves, or world hunger is reduced, or overpopulation ceases to be a problem, or statistical measures of social utility increase, etc., etc.  It never (it can&#8217;t really) mean individual improvement for each and every person in the society.</p>
<p>So if we had a society that was really &#8220;better&#8221; by any one of those measures, my instinct, as an artist, would be to find the individual for whom it didn&#8217;t work. S/he&#8217;d be an exception, necessarily &#8212; that that&#8217;s what would make him/her (and the story) interesting.</p>
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		<title>By: shineanthology</title>
		<link>http://shineanthology.wordpress.com/2008/10/28/shine-anthology-guidelines/#comment-31</link>
		<dc:creator>shineanthology</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 17 Nov 2008 15:56:08 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Ken,

&#039;A really sad story told in an optimistic future.&#039;

Hard to say. It depends.

Roughly speaking, if the sad story is to illustrate that the optimistic future isn&#039;t really optimistic at all -- a bit like a party disrupted by an uninvited guest, or clouds over paradise -- then that would be a hard, if not impossible, sell. 

What I&#039;m looking for is for stories where the progress is hard-fought against the background of a troubled society rather than an optimistic future that came around easily (even &lt;i&gt;too&lt;/i&gt; easily) -- like through somebody inventing cheap, easy-to-reproduce tabletop fusion that solves our energy problems overnight -- meaning the change was only a technological fix and not a ground shift in our mentality. The former represents hope, the latter merely a Pyrrhic victory.

Not saying that the former is a bad story (it can be really good: all depending on the execution of the concept), but not what I&#039;m really looking for. Basically, I&#039;d rather see the first, very difficult but hopeful step towards a better tomorrow than the end result (especially if it doesn&#039;t show &lt;i&gt;how&lt;/i&gt; we got there). In fiction, the road is often much more interesting than the final destination.

Nevertheless: it depends. I&#039;d need more info, or look at the story itself.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Ken,</p>
<p>&#8216;A really sad story told in an optimistic future.&#8217;</p>
<p>Hard to say. It depends.</p>
<p>Roughly speaking, if the sad story is to illustrate that the optimistic future isn&#8217;t really optimistic at all &#8212; a bit like a party disrupted by an uninvited guest, or clouds over paradise &#8212; then that would be a hard, if not impossible, sell. </p>
<p>What I&#8217;m looking for is for stories where the progress is hard-fought against the background of a troubled society rather than an optimistic future that came around easily (even <i>too</i> easily) &#8212; like through somebody inventing cheap, easy-to-reproduce tabletop fusion that solves our energy problems overnight &#8212; meaning the change was only a technological fix and not a ground shift in our mentality. The former represents hope, the latter merely a Pyrrhic victory.</p>
<p>Not saying that the former is a bad story (it can be really good: all depending on the execution of the concept), but not what I&#8217;m really looking for. Basically, I&#8217;d rather see the first, very difficult but hopeful step towards a better tomorrow than the end result (especially if it doesn&#8217;t show <i>how</i> we got there). In fiction, the road is often much more interesting than the final destination.</p>
<p>Nevertheless: it depends. I&#8217;d need more info, or look at the story itself.</p>
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